Day 24-25: deleted 249 words, added some more to give a total for the two days of +72.
Deleting a scenelet is always a mixed joy. On the plus side, it included ridiculous waffle which the book is better without. On the minus side, it also included some lovely fun lines that now languish in a file called "ShardsBits".
(Oh, LJ, you have: you've finally fixed the date function so that it defaults to the current time instead of the time I started writing the post. Yay you!)
Deleting a scenelet is always a mixed joy. On the plus side, it included ridiculous waffle which the book is better without. On the minus side, it also included some lovely fun lines that now languish in a file called "ShardsBits".
"Are you afraid that if they make peace, Lady Dorothea will discover that you have been betraying her to the Queen?"
"Why should I fear that? If the Queen wants revenge on me, she may take it by far surer methods than slandering me to the most merciful lady in the Kalmar Union."
"Would Lord Esge be so merciful -- or the burgomasters of Kjøbenhavn? Or your own men whose names you sold to her?"
(Oh, LJ, you have: you've finally fixed the date function so that it defaults to the current time instead of the time I started writing the post. Yay you!)