Progress for my lunch hour

[zeborah]

Deleted 62 pages. The story now consists of "Shards of Truth. Chapter One".

Comments

[slrose.livejournal.com]

I suppose your protagonists have to be careful that they don't mix up the Shards of Truth with the Shards of Honor lying about.

:)

[zeborah]

<wry> Yes, that is frustrating; but there's no other possible title: the book it's a sequel to is "Chalice of Truth" and now the Chalice is broken, so...

All mutable at the whim of an editor, naturally.

[slrose.livejournal.com]

I was picturing them with a collection of fragments. "That's not a shard of truth!"

"Are you sure."

"Of course I'm sure. That's honor."

"But I thought blue was truth."

"No, true blue is about honor. Truth is golden."

"I thought silence was golden."

"Hush. This is a shard of truth. Golden see."

"But what about that purple one?"

"Oh, you don't want to get that one mixed in, that's a shard of destiny and it will really mess things up."

^_^

[green-knight.livejournal.com]

If you're not careful, you'll be into negative pages soon...

[green-knight.livejournal.com]

Only one thing: make a mosaic.

[heleninwales.livejournal.com]

Oh, dear. However, if the following chapters were heading off in the wrong direction, that's all you can do. :(

I hope you soon regain the lost ground.