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May. 22nd, 2013 08:10 am
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The storms that were coming down through Dallas got here last night. We had huge thunder and lightning and pounding rain, but no hail, at least at our house.

It's doing great things for our garden. On Monday I realized I didn't have a vegetable for a side dish for dinner (over-fried chicken) and went out in the garden and found a squash ready to go. We've already had tons of lettuce and some green tomatoes (which are great fried, sauteed, or baked in pies), and it looks like the okra will be ready soon.

I updated my web site a bit, added the link to the interview with me by Liz Bourke on Tor.com, plus added a separate page listing the the reprint ebooks I have out for $2.99 so they're easier to find.

Also reposted some of the fan art I've gotten for the Books of the Raksura on tumblr.
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Dear Mr. Kay,

I’ve been a fan of your books since I read The Lions of al-Rassan and lamented the fact that it was a standalone. While I haven’t read every GGK book published, I’ve read enough to know that they are part of an impressive and imaginative body of work. When I learned that River of Stars could be read on its own, even though it is set in the same world as its predecessor, Under Heaven, I requested it for review and I’m so glad I did. Not every authorial choice worked for me, but it was absolutely a pleasure to be in the hands of a master stylist and storyteller.

River of Stars by Guy Gavriel KayRiver of Stars is set in a 12th Century country, Kitai, whose characteristics are drawn from the history of the Song Dynasty of China, but it is rightly called a historical fantasy rather than a historical novel. The main characters and the overall story arc are based on real people and events, but the book neither fictionalizes real life individuals nor drops made-up characters into real-life events. This allows the author to create relationships and events that did not exist without pulling the reader who has knowledge of the history out of the story. I wish more authors would think of their historicals this way (when appropriate, obviously), because it frees both the author and the reader to enter the world without thinking about what it does and doesn’t have to contain.

There aren’t many of the standard markers of traditional fantasy. There are events and circumstances that don’t fit into a strictly rational conception of the world, but they seem completely reasonably within the worldview of the actors. I enjoyed this way of situation the book in the fantasy genre, but readers looking for a more traditional “fantasy” read might want to take note.

It’s difficult to say much about the plot without giving away one of the great pleasures of reading an epic novel, which is watching the complicated cast of characters and the events unfold. Over the last couple of centuries, Kitai has become a truncated version of its former, more expansive dynastic self, with uncultured but powerful warriors to the north and a well-meaning emperor who leaves day to day policy making to his advisors. Not surprisingly, this creates both factional conflict and increasing hardship for his people. Simmering discontent bubbles to the surface and leads to open warfare, within and across Kitai’s borders.

For romance readers, there is a slowly developing relationship between two of the main POV characters. At the beginning we meet Ren Daiyan, the younger son of a relatively minor civil servant, who is training to become a warrior even though that is not a high-status occupation in Kitai (only the second or third sons of farmers go into the army). He achieves this goal, but in anything but a predictable way. We also meet Lin Shan, an unusually educated young woman who is a promising poet. Although they eventually develop a romantic relationship, they grow and mature separately and have individual experiences that recall epic romances of old rather than the kinds of stories common in the genre today. And the reader spends long stretches in the POV of other characters, some of whom come and go quickly while others recur regularly throughout the book.

Kay is justly known as much for his stylistic achievements as his plotting and characterizations, and River of Stars is no exception. The writing is lush and elegant, and there is a wealth of description. I tend to prefer spare prose, but when someone writes as well as this I enjoy the change of pace. And the descriptions aren’t superfluous; descriptions about the natural world do more than provide atmosphere, they signal the importance of that world in the lives of the characters and they foreshadow the role nature plays in man’s choices. For example, early in the book we get this description as Daiyan is making a journey from his village to the site of a murder:

There were nightingales in these woods. Daiyan’s brother had come here hunting them. In Hanjin, at the court, they wanted nightingales for some enormous garden the emperor was building. Officials paid considerable sums for them. It was folly, of course. How could a caged bird survive the journey from Szechen? They’d have to go downriver through the gorges, then by imperial courier north. If the couriers rode fast…the very idea of a birdcage bouncing by a saddle was sad and amusing, both. Daiyan liked nightingales. Some complained they kept you awake at night, but he didn’t mind that.

Those nightingales (and the enormous garden) turn out to be a harbinger of conditions that are critical to the story that unfolds.

This is not a book to hurry through, and that is both a strength and a weakness. It is a strength because aren’t we, as romance readers, frequently wishing for books that recall the epic romances we used to read? While the romance is just a part of the story here, River of Stars may well be closer to the epic romances of the 1970s and 1980s than today’s historicals are. On the other hand, there are a lot of POVs and story lines that come and go. A fascinating character pops up, only to vanish a few chapters later. And while Lin Shan is a terrific portrayal of a strong and interesting woman, there are quite a few characterizations of women that are more stereotypical.

Which brings me to my primary caveat about the book. This is a novel of ideas as much as an action drama, and the characterizations suffer somewhat. Even the main POV characters don’t feel as present, as alive, to me as they did in The Lions of al-Rassan or Tigana or Song of Arbonne. The story is about the fall and rise of a society, and the warp and weft of that societal change takes center stage; as a result, the characters sometimes feel primarily like players on that stage. They’re interesting and compelling, but their personal idiosyncrasies and desires feel subordinated to the larger tale.

Nevertheless, this is an engrossing read. It demands your attention, but once you sink into the story, it unfolds in a rich and satisfying way. Grade: B+

~ Sunita

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The Big Idea: Rhiannon Held

May. 22nd, 2013 12:29 pm
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Posted by John Scalzi

Readers often have default expectations when it comes to their reading — default expectations that we call “tropes.” But where do you go as a writer when the tropes don’t take you where your characters need to be? It’s a question that Rhiannon Held explores today as she writes about her new novel, Tarnished.

RHIANNON HELD:

Tarnished is the second book in my series, and if I had to articulate an over-arcing big idea for the whole series, it’s that I love to explore emotional truths tied to situations that don’t come up in typical urban fantasy tropes. In the first book, Silver, those non-trope situations were born from the religion and culture that I created for my werewolves. In Tarnished, I decided I wanted to find the emotional resonance in non-trope leadership strategies, and romantic relationships.

At the end of Silver my two main characters, Andrew and Silver, were poised to challenge for leadership of the largest werewolf pack in North America. In the typical urban fantasy trope as I’ve encountered it, usually the protagonist’s resistance to being Grand Supernatural Poobah begins as internal: she wouldn’t be any good at it! No one would accept her! Then, when she agrees, the resistance switches to being external: the rock golems won’t listen to a meat bag! The shapeshifters won’t listen to anyone banging a golem!

But once they’ve set aside their initial internal objections, would protagonists really automatically be totally committed to leading? Obviously they have to learn how to win everyone over, but would the protagonists really be completely awesome at leading once everyone’s behind them? Book 1 ended with Andrew and Silver’s decision to try to lead, and I decided that Book 2 needed to explore exactly what it would take to get there. Do they have the self-confidence to do it? Is that self-confidence strong enough to withstand everyone else’s doubt? Can they make hard decisions and keep their cool when people question those decisions? Can they admit they were wrong when they make mistakes? Can they delegate and trust others to get things done?

And can they lead, as opposed to just shouting louder than everyone else? Often werewolf alphas are portrayed as being all about physical strength, or if not physical strength, at least strength of emotional bullying. Andrew is somewhat slight in stature and slow from previous injuries; Silver can’t shift and can’t use her left arm. If they want to win the alphaship, they have do something other than shout loudest and punch hardest: they have to court allies, they have to coax people, they have to lead by example. I really wanted to showcase different leadership strategies, because while stories are often about the underdog beating the muscle-bound alpha, the underdog too often uses mystical punching powers that beat the alpha’s physical punching abilities. Why does punching have to be the measure of success?

Tarnished also introduces a new POV: Susan. She’s human and has a child with John, the Seattle alpha. She also has her moments of going toe-to-toe in fights with stronger, faster werewolves, but with her I also wanted to explore a different kind of romantic relationship. In Book 1, Andrew and Silver were somewhat typical of urban fantasies: they met, they were attracted to each other, obstacles kept them apart, but they got together in the end. In Book 2, I show them working as a functioning, loving team, so the romantic tension switches over to Susan and John.

Whether in books, movies, or television, I’ve always wanted more opportunities to cheer a couple on to working out their problems. That’s what gets you through life, after all—not giving up after the first big fight. Work through the fight and the relationship often ends up stronger on the other side. Of course, that’s not to say that life isn’t also filled with truly irreconcilable differences or people who are assholes. Staying to try desperately to change things in those situations can make everyone miserable. The way I think of it is that you want to preserve and care for a precious connection between two people, rather than upholding some ideal of not splitting up for moral reasons even if you have no connection left at all.

The trouble is that in fiction, the relationships being “worked on” are usually only based on irreconcilable differences or assholery. In that case, of course you’re cheering for the couple to break up! That way, one can get with the other hot, passionate love interest introduced in this book who is clearly so much better for him or her. Or else you’re rolling your eyes while waiting for the couple who’s off-again every book to provide cheap romantic tension to get their laughable miscommunication straightened out so they can be on-again.

Susan and John are already together. They have a child. They love each other, but their relationship is on the rocks because John lets himself be ashamed of her and misguidedly tries to protect her by keeping her out of the werewolf world. That’s something that can be worked out—I hope it’s something the readers want to see worked out!—because why should love be sacrificed to social expectations? But reconciliation is something they both have to work hard to achieve.

Hopefully playing with non-trope situations can help knock aside a few of the most annoying tropes as well. If my characters can remind readers that natural charisma doesn’t mean you’re born knowing exactly how to lead; people who aren’t hot, single twenty-somethings fall in love; and protecting your love by keeping them in ignorance of the supernatural world is forgetting they’re a consenting adult… so much the better!

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May 22nd, 2013: Check out this awesome email I got from Ash, you guys:

dear ryan

a while back i was in the process of purchasing your one amazing human shirt when i noticed that the nutritional information said 80kg on it, because i'm guessing that's the average weight of an adult human thing?

"that is pretty worrying!" said i, "for i am an adult human thing and i weigh exactly half that!"

this provoked a trip to the doctors, and a blood test revealed that i've not only got an underactive thyroid gland but also diabetes :o now both these conditions are getting treated asap before i turn into one (1) spooky skeleton! dinosaur comics might have literally saved my life! or you know at least greatly improved the quality of it/my chances of not dying

i guess that means i owe you one,
ash

This is awesome, and I'm glad I could help! Also I'm amazed that Dinosaur Comics merchandise could literally save your life. Good work, funny t-shirt!

One year ago today: today's comic has filename comic2-2222.png, a repeated-two filenaming pleasure that i am unlikely to enjoy again, unless i live for another... 76 years?? maaaaaaan

– Ryan

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By Arturo R. García

When last we left Ryan Coogler’s Fruitvale, it had earned both the top prizes and a distribution deal at the Sundance Film Festival.

Now known as Fruitvale Station, the film is continuing to win acclaim, this time at the Cannes Film Festival. As star Michael B. Jordan, who plays Oscar Grant, the victim of a police shooting on New Year’s Day 2009, told the Associated Press:

“It’s electric. It’s like March Madness. It’s that time of year where everyone’s just in it, talking about movies.

“I don’t want to be that ignorant American who comes over here and expects everyone to love it: ‘Oh, you got to love it because it’s hot over there. I want people to be excited about it because it really affects them.”

The trailer above offers a glimpse into not just the events leading up to Grant’s death, but the world he was trying to rebuild with himself, his mother (Octavia Spencer), his partner Sophina (Melonie Diaz) and their daughter Tatiana (Ariana Neal). One thing that did strike me from the footage so far: we’re going to get at least some interpretation of how the shooting was captured on video by witnesses, and the police response.

Fruitvale opens on July 26, which places it in a relatively slow week in the middle of summer blockbuster season. The only “major” film opening that week appears to be Hugh Jackman’s The Wolverine. According to Movie Insider, the other films of note debuting are the Cate Blanchett/Alec Baldwin/Louis C.K. project Blue Jasmine and Blackfish, a documentary that uses the story of a killer whale responsible for the deaths of three trainers to shed light on how orcas are treated in captivity.

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The desert space pants worn by Mark Hamill in Star Wars: Episode IV are up for sale if you want them. The opening bid seems to be $100,000 dollars. You wanna wear Luke’s hipster pants for $100,000 bucks? We wonder if you really care about anyone. (We care.)

Your daily collection of offsite links cares. A lot. Also, pizza is for some reason referenced in three different ways. We don’t plan these days, they just happen. 

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Image is Everything

May. 22nd, 2013 11:30 am
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British Genre Fiction Focus: Image is Everything

Welcome back to the British Genre Fiction Focus, Tor.com’s weekly column dedicated to news and new releases from the United Kingdom’s thriving speculative fiction industry.

This week, image is everything—or so says John Dugdale, who in the aftermath of Inferno considered the significance of Robert Langdon’s Harris Tweed jacket vis-à-vis the visibility of Dan Brown’s protagonist. I want to know which figures from genre fiction have apparel even half as iconic.

Later on, in Cover Art Corner, we’ll look ahead to “a gothic fable for all ages” from Carlos Ruiz Zafon, alongside news of two new books Solaris plan to publish next spring, including the author of The Ultimate Dragon Saga’s long-awaited return to genre fiction.

Last but not least, Gollancz have announced that they’re currently undergoing a significant restructure, and I can’t decide whether to offer congratulations or commiserations, because I’m afraid I’ve heard this story before. Someone put my mind at ease, please!

I’ve got a few new releases up my sleeves for you this week as well, not least some previously unpublished poetry by J. R. R. Tolkien, Mur Lafferty’s first novel, and a promising chronicle of Life on the Preservation.

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4 things

May. 22nd, 2013 02:35 pm
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1. Scifi author Kameron Hurley keeps writing articles the titles of which seem so enormously appealing? Because they're all about writing matriarchies and stepping away from Western history as the basis of everything and writing women and brutality and war and needless to say ALL OF THESE ARE MY INTERESTS but it's like... after two books I think were genuinely very good (though not unflawed) she wrote the latest part of her trilogy in a way that was utterly terrible and full of racist/sexist/etc fail and I... I just can't take her writing about these issues seriously anymore. Even though she'd likely have interesting things to say regardless? I just can't bring myself to read any non-fiction she's written about how not to fail. IDK. I'm more willing to buy her next book if it looks promising than I am to read a 1000 word essay on writing.

2. Work is work, today, and so of course I went on tumblr and searched for "science bros". Among many NSFW and delightfully intimate images, this one has cheered me up the most (SFW). I don't even know. (Also, made me think of [personal profile] thingswithwings's fic, of course.)

3. Other delightful things, I keep stumbling upon this in an open tab and smiling - junior hockey players kiss after a win. What makes this truly delightful is how utterly unapologetic they were about it afterwards. Not that I want to write about the way culture constructs masculinity around violence - sports, the military - and how every single "tough guy" occupation is actually an occupation where you have an unbelievable level of intimacy with your (same-gender) coworkers and the cultural work that goes into "normalizing" that intimacy and distancing itself from anything romantic and sexual when the spectrum of human feelings is really not that black and white... oh wow can you tell I'm back in academia? Took a semester but apparently my sociologist brain is back in high gear.

4. God, the past few days have been like waking up from a crash. The last 2 weeks were basically heavy cortisol intake and it's taking my body a while to recover. Every day I'm a bit less tired, but everything is still kind of overwhelming. My mom, whose birthday it is today, has also decided that this week is Mourning Over How Not Alike She And I Are week so every day I've called her she's been super distant and/or started crying on the phone, refusing to tell me what's wrong because "if I don't understand then she can't explain to me". I just. I'm far away, there's nothing I can do, if I don't call her daily she gets upset, when I do call she cries and refuses to tell me what's up, my dad says she's been fine at home so clearly it's something specifically to do with me and I just. I am so tired of playing this game and especially double, super tired considering my goal for this week is to make it through without hopping back on the stress train.
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Posted by Eric Geller

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Artwork courtesy of Joshua Stolte

Welcome back to the Star Wars HoloNet Digest, a weekly feature where I bring you a recap of the latest news from the world of Star Wars. Whether it’s an Episode VII rumor or a noteworthy author interview, you’ll find it here. Let’s check the HoloNet and see what happened in the past week. The huge news that’s dominating this week is Lucasfilm’s announcement of its next animated series. The show will be called Star Wars Rebels, and it will take place between Episodes III and IV, as “the Empire is securing its grip on the galaxy and hunting down the last of the Jedi Knights” and “as a fledgling rebellion against the Empire is taking shape.” We know very little about the show so far. The Clone Wars supervising director Dave Filoni will executive produce, along with Star Wars spinoff film writer Simon Kinberg and Gargoyles creator Greg Weisman. The premiere episode, written by Kinberg, will air on Disney Channel in Fall 2014, after which the series will move to Disney XD for regular airings. You can check out a video announcement from Dave Filoni over at StarWars.com. A first look at the series will debut at Celebration Europe II this summer. I’m really looking forward to seeing this series. The “inter-trilogy” period is ripe for exposition in the animated medium, with all sorts of post-Episode III loose threads looking for resolution. Dave Filoni’s involvement emphasizes Lucasfilm’s interest in maintaining continuity of personnel, and given that Filoni garnered tremendous praise and received strong support from the fans for his work on The Clone Wars, we can be confident that Star Wars Rebels is in good hands. We’re at a point now where we’re about to be deluged with new Star Wars information, from Episode VII spoilers to details about Rebels to spinoff film announcements. I for one can’t wait to see how this all shakes out in the next few years. I’ll be tuning in to watch the premiere of Rebels for sure. Speaking of The Clone Wars, you may recall that we’re still waiting on that promised bonus content composed of would-be Season 6 episodes. Well, attendees at the first of Disney’s Star Wars Weekends (May 17-19) were treated to another preview of that bonus content. This clip, presented by Dave Filoni via prerecorded video, showed Yoda enlisting Anakin’s help to break him out of the Jedi Temple. What could possibly be the context for such a scene? That’s still unclear. If you want to check out this bonus content preview, hit the link above. Moving over to the business side of things, we have a report that suggests that J.J. Abrams will be more involved in the future of Star Wars than just Episode VII. Entertainment website TheWrap published a story detailing Abrams’ disappointment with his Star Trek creative freedom –– he’d wanted to revitalize the franchise’s merchandising and tie-in properties, but the Trek licensing rights are split across several companies –– and their article notes that Star Wars may offer Abrams what Star Trek could not. According to TheWrap, Abrams “has a deal that is believed to include creative and profit participation in "Star Wars" inspired merchandise and spin-offs,” thus giving him “more control in shaping the legacy of the Skywalker clan than he would have had with developing side projects” for Star Trek. I’ve long suspected that, while Kathleen Kennedy will be the driving force being the new era of Star Wars, it will be people like Abrams who are tapped to carry out specific projects for her, so this report makes a lot of sense. Speaking of Kathleen Kennedy, remember when she said that Lucasfilm would try to keep fan interest in mind (and keep secrecy efforts in perspective) when making Episode VII? Well, Bad Robot Productions’ Bryan Burk –– who is co-producing Episode VII –– says he hasn’t yet discussed that conundrum with Kennedy. Speaking to /Film, Burk seemed to defend the need for strong secrecy measures; he also cited the need for a “balance” between competing interests that he called “a hard thing.” Hopefully Kennedy and Burk, along with Abrams and other key players, will get together soon to hash out a game plan for Episode VII. Burk is right that we shouldn’t be given too much ahead of time, but there comes a point at which overwhelming secrecy can be a turn-off to fans. J.J. Abrams has been making the rounds lately to promote his new film Star Trek Into Darkness, and as you might expect, no interviewer can seem to avoid bringing up The Wars. Abrams’ latest round of interviews is with a Brazilian movie site, The Associated Press, and Jimmy Kimmel. The Kimmel interview is particularly noteworthy because Abrams answers questions not just from the ABC talk show host, but also from a selection of audience members, two of whom Suvudu readers will undoubtedly recognize. This was a light week for book news, but I do have two stories for you. The first is that Christie Golden (author of three Fate of the Jedi novels) will be writing a Star Wars Insider short story to tie into Troy Denning’s upcoming novel Crucible. Golden’s story, “Good Hunting,” which will appear in Insider #142, will star Jaina and Allana Solo as well as Tenel Ka Djo “on a hostile wilderness planet,” according to Del Rey’s Facebook announcement. Also on the literature front, yesterday The Huffington Post unveiled a new book trailer for The Making of Return of the Jedi, J.W. Rinzler’s upcoming behind-the-scenes look at Episode VI. HuffPo published an interview with Rinzler alongside the trailer, in which the Lucasfilm editor discussed George Lucas’ divorce, Harrison Ford’s attitude toward the third OT film, and…Ewok sex? Yeah… Lastly, as I make this awkward segue away from my last sentence, we have some good news about Celebration Europe II. Fans attending the July convention in Essen, Germany will not only get to see a first look at Star Wars Rebels; they’ll also get to hear from Lucasfilm president Kathleen Kennedy herself. This will be Kennedy’s first appearance at a Star Wars Celebration, and given George Lucas’ handoff of his company to her just months before Disney bought it, fans will have a lot of questions for the veteran film producer. With every CEII announcement, I get more and more bummed that I won’t be able to make it to the convention. If you’ll be out there in Germany for CEII, give Kathleen Kennedy a high-five for me.
Eric Geller is a college student majoring in political science whose interests include technology, journalism, and of course Star Wars. He reviews The Clone Wars TV series and manages social media for Star Wars fan site TheForce.Net. He also co-hosts The ForceCast podcast. He is originally from the Washington, D.C. area.

Reverse Bang: Hess v. Stark, et al.

May. 22nd, 2013 07:59 am
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Title: Hess v. Stark, et al.
Artist: Gabbi
Author: Ellid/Gabbi
Rating: M for implied sexual content
Universe: MCU AU
Word Count: 12934
Warnings: none
Summary: Tony Stark inherited many things from his father: mechanical genius, a thriving company, piles of money, and a class action suit because dear ol' Dad never came through on that !#$@$!$! flying car. Little does he know that his current teammate and unacknowledged crush is one of the plaintiffs even though he was frozen in a plane crash at the time....

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My thanks to Gabbi for her wonderful art, and to the mods for organizing this challenge. This is my first fic for this pairing, and I really enjoyed writing it!

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which seems to be going the way of all good things.

Tinkering with the wording of prayers

May. 22nd, 2013 12:38 pm
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In a comment to a recent post of mine (well, it was recent when I started writing this!), [livejournal.com profile] bluepork said:
I would far prefer to engage in imaginative thought around the prayers, than arbitrarily alter a centuries old and ultimately relatively harmless mishnaic quote because I don't like it. I have always thought that one of the strengths of the jewish people is that the liturgy is same wherever you go.

I already answered there how actually there used to be quite a bit of variation in the liturgy; I'd like to instead talk here about examples of how Jews have traditionally tweaked the wording in their prayers in the way that [livejournal.com profile] bluepork decries.

Example 1: In the first בְּרָכָה before the שְׁמַע in the morning, we say יוֹצֵר אוֹר וּבוֹרֵא חֹשֶׁךְ עֹשֶׂה שָׁלוֹם וּבוֹרֵא אֶת־הַכֹּל "[God] Who forms light and creates darkness; Who makes peace and creates everything." In the verse from which this is taken, however, Isaiah 45:7, it reads יוֹצֵר אוֹר וּבוֹרֵא חֹשֶׁךְ עֹשֶׂה שָׁלוֹם וּבוֹרֵא רָע "[I] form light and create darkness: I make peace and create evil." Possibly the prophet here was protesting here against the dualism of Zoroastrianism; however, this was felt too edgy for Jewish prayer, so the wording was changed in the liturgy. This was, however, done in ancient times (as are several of the following examples, but not them all).

Example 2: When we read the Thirteen Attributes of Mercy (Ex. 34:6–7), we read them as:

The Lord, The Lord God, merciful and gracious, slow to anger, and abundant in goodness and truth; keeping mercy for thousands, forgiving iniquity and transgression and sin, and clearing the guilty. ה׳ ה׳ אֵל רַחוּם וְחַנּוּן אֶרֶךְ אַפַּיִם וְרַב־חֶסֶד וֶאֱמֶת׃ נֹצֵר חֶסֶד לָאֲלָפִים נֹשֵׂא עָוֹן וָפֶשַׁע וְחַטָּאָה וְנַקֵּה
This is a really sneaky thing we do with the verse, because we're actually stopping halfway through an emphatic negative; the quotation reads in full:
The Lord, The Lord God, merciful and gracious, slow to anger, and abundant in goodness and truth; keeping mercy for thousands, forgiving iniquity and transgression and sin, and by no means clearing the guilty; visiting the iniquity of the fathers upon the children, and upon the children's children, unto the third and to the fourth generation. ה׳ ה׳ אֵל רַחוּם וְחַנּוּן אֶרֶךְ אַפַּיִם וְרַב־חֶסֶד וֶאֱמֶת׃ נֹצֵר חֶסֶד לָאֲלָפִים נֹשֵׂא עָוֹן וָפֶשַׁע וְחַטָּאָה וְנַקֵּה [end of quoted text] לֹא יְנַקֶּה פֹּקֵד עֲוֹן אָבוֹת עַל־בָּנִים וְעַל־בְּנֵי בָנִים עַל־שִׁלֵּשִׁים וְעַל־רִבֵּעִים׃

Example 3: During Hagbahah we recite וְזֹאת הַתּוֹרָה אֲשֶׁר־שָׂם מֹשֶׁה לִפְנֵי בְּנֵי יִשְׂרָאֵל עַל־פִּי ה׳ בְּיַד־מֹשֶׁה׃ "And this is the Torah which Moses set before the Israelites at God's dictation, set down by the hand of Moses." However, this is actually a combination of two half-verses: Deuteronomy 4:44 (up to יִשְׂרָאֵל) and Numbers 9:23. Some authorities dislike meddling with Scriptural quotations in this way, and leave this out altogether. (I believe it's missing from נוּסַח אַרִי, for instance.)

Example 4: The first יְקוּם פֻרְקָן prayer opens, "My deliverance arise from heaven [...] to our masters and teachers of the holy communities in the land of Israel [and] in Babylonia." This was intended as a prayer for Diaspora Jewry, who mostly lived in Babylonia at the time; as this is fairly evidently no longer the case, the ArtScroll siddur goes down the route of creative translation, interpreting בָּבֶל as referring to the whole of the Diaspora. The Singer's Prayer Book, however, solves the difficulty by adding the completely new words וְדִי בְּכָל אַרְעָה גַלְוָתָנָא "and in all the lands of our exile" (based on a suggestion by Seligman Baer). This prayer, whilst not recorded in the Talmud, is of an age with it: it must have originated in Babylonia, and no later than when Aramaic was displaced by Arabic as the vernacular following the Islamic conquest.

Example 5: The Prayer for the Royal Family has been extensively tinkered with and shortened by successive Chief Rabbis. The prayer is not originally British; it's goes back to the Sephardim of the sixteenth century. The commentary volume on the first edition Singer's Prayer Book admits: "It corresponds to an autocratic form of monarchy, and some changes have therefore been introduced into our Prayer Book to bring the sentiments expressed more into harmony with the actual constitution of the country."

Not-quite-example 6: The Shulchan Aruch says one should not say הַנוֹתֵן לַיָעֵף כֹּחַ because this בְּרָכָה is not in the Talmud. The fact that we do say it indicates a willingness to include post-Talmudic innovation in our liturgy and a willingness not to let sticklers for tradition, be they never so highly regarded, hold back the tide of such innovation.

Example 7: Comparing the different rites, there is quite a bit of variation between them. Of course, such variation did not as a rule arise deliberately; and in ancient times the various communities were probably unaware of each others' rulings, but there is at least one place where the oldest, Gaonic siddurim have our wording, but Machzor Vitry, the grand-daddy of all Ashkenazi siddurim and machzorim, does not; which means that at some point the Ashkenazi tradition chose to turn its back on its received tradition (from Machzor Vitry) and adopt that of the Gaonic siddurim. (One could also cite Isaac Luria inventing the nusach that takes his epiphet by combining elements of Ashkenazi and Sephardi nusachim.)

I will admit that many of these are not precise matches for the situation I described at the outset, but I think they serve to show that meddling with quotations and liturgical texts is something that has a long and accepted, if not particularly well-known, history in Judaism.

Reflections

May. 22nd, 2013 03:33 am
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It's now May 22nd, my 60th birthday, and following up on a suggestion from [personal profile] sharpest_asp, I am starting to reflect on the changes that the years have wrought, and attempting to focus on those changes that have created the most joy for others in my life and for me. I don't know whether everyone on my access list would be interested in reading the reflections, whether others who are not yet interested on my access list would be interested, and whether I should make the filter opt-in or opt-out. I think for people who are already on my access list, I'll make it opt-out; I'll assume that you're interesting in reading my reflections, and count on you to let me know if you would like to be removed from that filter. For others, if you would like access, please let me know, and we'll talk about it.

I'm going to lie down now, and see what happens -- I need to be up in 3 hours -- but I'll try to get to setting all this up and starting to write soon. Perhaps I'll even make a commitment to posting reflections regularly, and you can then hold me accountable to it; I'm not quite ready to make such a commitment yet.

As a promissory note, I'll share one thing now with everyone. It's now 3:33 AM, and 333 is a special number for me. At 3:33 pm every day, and at 3:33 am if I'm awake, as I often am, I stop for a minute of gratitude. Why is 333 special to me? It was my lottery number in the military conscription for the war in Vietnam. I am grateful every day that I was not called to serve my country in that war, specifically that I did not see combat in Southeast Asia. I have many reasons for feeling this way, but right now I'll share the most egocentric of them. Although it is possible that serving in the military at that time would have improved my life, the evidence available to me suggests that it would have made my life worse, and that I might have come back, if I did come back, significantly messed up by what I had seen and done, not to mention possible injuries.

I feel that I must say that I intend no disrespect to anyone who has served or is now serving in the military. Discussion of my views concerning U.S. foreign policy at that time, and of my thoughts about war in general in human life, are for another time -- and initially at least, for a restricted audience. I do not want any reader who has served or is serving to feel disrespected by my gratitude that I was not called to serve in that way and at that time.

Future posts about my reflections about my life will mostly be restricted to the filter -- probably to be called "Reflections" -- that I am going to create. I'm posting this publicly so everyone will have a taste of what those reflections may be like, and can make a more informed decision about whether or not you wish to see them on your Reading page.

Thanks to all my Dreamwidth friends who have expressed good wishes to me on my 60th birthday. Although I have had the opportunity to meet only a few of you in person to date, I hope to meet more of you as time goes on, and your friendship and support mean a good deal to me.

I'm not, I think, a statistically normal denizen of Dreamwidth -- I have not yet written any fan fiction, for instance -- but I feel at home here nonetheless. It feels very risky to begin this sharing: I'm making myself very vulnerable to many people I have never met. And, the Internet, no matter how I use filters and access controls, and no matter how hard the developers of this platform work to keep private what we wish to keep private, the Internet is a very public place. What is posted here is easily accessible to those who seek it out. The controls we attempt, I think of as locking the car and putting the valuables in the trunk -- for those fortunate enough to have cars and valuables --: it makes theft less easy, but it's no prevention. Likewise, no matter how hard we try to protect our privacy online, I view it as very limited. Furthermore, I have chosen to make this journal transparent to my real world identity. Everyone who wants to know who peoppenheimer on Dreamwidth is can find out with a trivial effort. And what I post here will be on the Internet as long as there is an Internet. Even if Dreamwidth shuts down some day, my former colleague Brewster Kahle's Wayback Machine and the robotic indexers will keep its content available as long as there is an Internet. Even though I am well aware of these dangers, because I feel so at home on Dreamwidth, and because I feel that I have friends here who will be interested in reading my reflections, I'm going to give it a try.

Thank you for being interested in me.

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May. 22nd, 2013 01:54 pm
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